Youtube Video - How to draw a cartoon giraffe

I have a new video on youtube. It's a "how to" on drawing a cartoon Giraffe. Please watch the video and let me know how I can improve.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W8Tu-ENpzRY

 The best way to find the video on youtube is to search for "draw a cartoon giraffe NCG". NCG stands for Next Cartooning Guru. My youtube account is under the name NextCartooningGuru. Here's the link to my channel on youtube.
http://www.youtube.com/user/NextCartooningGuru

Here is the sketch from the video.

Thanks much.


♥ NCG